Night Mistress

~edited..............again~

Angel of Death: I can understand, but i didn't want to explain everything in full detail, because this scene is in a future and i plan to go into a ...

I loved this. usually it;s the girl who is totally unsure with it. i like that you did a guy and how she is totally understanding on the whole thing. ...

Ash, sooooo mch better. i like the pretty-boy and pretty girl thing. that's was wrong what carmen did. You should keep your promises. this seems a lot more smoother than ...

It's felt the same, but you don't added anything, if you did, i didn't pick it up. it was alot smoother than before though and i liked it. i think ...

i am lost. but i liked the piece. i really think you should continue, so we, the readers, can get a better understanding of the characters. but it's up to ...

Okay. i lied. I found time beecause there is nothing on tv. Ash, seriously, you get better and better as you revise this. I love how you descrbie the bonding ...

this seems interesting. i saw that you had other wokr and i check it out. this makes me wonder what happen to Willow? was she raped? or tourted and then ...

i am writing a fencing match in this chapter i am working on. can you help me? please.

Ash, soooo much better. it stills make me mad that carmen and Nora aren't really helping Sophia's sitution. i like the little detail you add about Sophia's past and Nora. ...

Hey, Sorry, it is has taken me a while to post a review. I am happy but sad. I am Happy that Sophia realize Issac will be safer without her ...

Sorry it has taken me a while to read this. okay, I do agreed that she is being a bitch, but she has her right to be bitchy. hey, I ...

the new one comes out September 23 which is tuesday. yay!!!

endless_Secrets: thanks for reading and voting. i know alot of people are going to hat me because of the last line. i will pm you when i do posted the ...

this was very cute and very "young love". i like young love. posted another piece soon.